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Written attacks, this passive cursive.
Though these emotions warrent better action,
not to mention a focus on direction.
Perhaps sharper precision
would limit one to fewer follies?
It's much too early to say,
but I shall not slip, rambling
of that most pretentious of poisons.
Time.
As sensuous as it once was,
I've discarded those sheets,
leaving that, near unnoticable, seperation gaping.
Alternatives beckon,
their melody a seduction sweet.
Is it wiser to ignore,
or grasp at new oppertunities?
Comprehension, the infinite interesction.
We all choose the dead end once,
but next time,
I'm levelling that barrier.
Though these emotions warrent better action,
not to mention a focus on direction.
Perhaps sharper precision
would limit one to fewer follies?
It's much too early to say,
but I shall not slip, rambling
of that most pretentious of poisons.
Time.
As sensuous as it once was,
I've discarded those sheets,
leaving that, near unnoticable, seperation gaping.
Alternatives beckon,
their melody a seduction sweet.
Is it wiser to ignore,
or grasp at new oppertunities?
Comprehension, the infinite interesction.
We all choose the dead end once,
but next time,
I'm levelling that barrier.
perhaps it's a bit premature to admit this, but this is the first peice in probably...a year or more that im genuinely proud of.
My apologies for any spelling mistakes, ill edit when im not half awake lol.
My apologies for any spelling mistakes, ill edit when im not half awake lol.
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Well written. I find your word choice excellent ^^b